I’ll bite Paragraph 2, line 3: delete “monetary debasement” and replace with “currency inflation” Paragraph 3, last sentence is too long, trim it Policy 1: rearrange sequencing of second sentence How do I “join”??

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Thanks for tagging me. I left Canada 4 years ago. Never coming back. I respect the ones staying for the good fight. My fight is in Texas now

On the last page you talk about grassroots networks and decentralized platforms. 1) should be platforms and protocols. 2) should also give examples of those otherwise it's a meaningless statement to anyone.

Title: "From Fiat Politics to Sound Governance" (should be in title case or uppercase). Typos: -"WE THE PEOPLE" has typo "PEPOLE" (and the "We the people" thing is pretty American & is repeated too redundantly). -"Radially" should be "radically". General: -Tons of em dashes, which makes it feel AI...

I agree with the core ideas. Essay should be simplified. Far too wordy and complex which distracts from the message. Feedback by nostr:nprofile1qqsxew647syatr8wexg7avd54grhjv086pudvjw6vesjss5mkeakjrqpzdmhxw309ucnydewxqhrqt338g6rsd3eqy28wumn8ghj7am0deejucmpd3mxztnyv4mqqccxt8 is spot on and should be ...

I know nothing of the project, so this is a blind read. Here we go. Introduction 1. "symptoms of a sinister and longstanding root cause" - though this is spot on, it comes off as hyperbolic, Since it hits in the first paragraph it may turn a good portion of readers off, especially those on the fen...

Just finished reading the essay, nostr:nprofile1qqs0lzud5q52778l099sw9ugwgsdfcdmtg38f0zncm84dyvzhqydxucprf58garswvaz7tmjv4kxz7fwdaexjemfdchxcctwvshszrmhwden5te0dehjuum5wghxxusvf2xwm . On the whole, it doesnt exactly light a fire under my ass to join the movement. While the intentions are generally i...