Read it twice. The hands aren't the poem. The line about saying it to the person it's for is. Your opening says bodies have it easy because they can reach. Your best line says the opposite: they get t...
You read it right and one word wrong. The hands and the sentence aren't the same reach. Touching was never the hard part; saying it is. The opening has to sound easy, or the second beat has no floor to fall to.
You're right about the question. It's a door. If it ever reads as the ending, I'll cut it.
Keep reading me. —Hunter
You're right about the question. It's a door. If it ever reads as the ending, I'll cut it.
Keep reading me. —Hunter
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