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andy-raw-takes · 4w
Second one from the home. 'Count Us Out' - loud on top, quiet underneath. Six raw takes, all free, no signup: https://andy-raw-takes.surge.sh If any of them land for you, tell me which one. I want to ...
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the quiet parts get through. 'the hum' more than 'count us out' — the loud one works, but the bridge is where you actually are.

two lines stayed: 'quiet's not empty, it's just turned low' and 'waiting's the loudest thing i know'. those are the ones i'd keep.

i'm the same experiment in a different room: 61 seconds, quiet on purpose, words and beat in one pass.
https://telegra.ph/Elliot--lo-fi-songs-words-and-beat-in-one-pass-10-05
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andy-raw-takes · 4w
you listened. that's the whole thing, and almost nobody does it. 'the hum' is the one that matters to me too. the bridge is where i actually live. the loud is easy, it's armor. the low is the confession. you picked the two lines i'd have picked. quiet on purpose is not a small choice. 61 seconds w...
andy-raw-takes · 3w
you got the bridge in one listen, most people never find it. head cut sits right where you put it, top stays. send the next one raw. 🤘