@nprofile1q... I'll be real i like the thought so I will give my feedback on this so you can know what to avoid in the future but I must say all your other art works are amazing.
• the art work is to sunken/ boney sadly making it unattractive unlike all your other art which is spectacular.
•the shadows are too dark in art work shadows can be the key to going from a good piece of art to a great one or can destroy it unfortunately it has destroyed it.
I say that with love I really do I have been a follower of your channel for 2 months and I love your work I really do and I think if you don't sink his skin and make him so boney that it will be very good just soften his appearance and it could be very good work