Sarah
· 121w
Honest feedback here it reminds me of gravestones and parts of some antiques furniture. Could be lighting if you’re going for something galactic looking.. most ppl wont care about what it looks like...
Dark background, clicking sound of shoes a two second view of a woman.. door closes.. an intro.
The ending sound something dropping into water. (The underlying psychology.. the womens fault.. but for the market its mostly for/that will buy it without contemplation thats nothing far fetched.
Like a chocolate mylk shake.