I know nothing of the project, so this is a blind read. Here we go.
Introduction
1. "symptoms of a sinister and longstanding root cause" - though this is spot on, it comes off as hyperbolic, Since i...
This is brilliant feedback. Thoughtful, honest and very much appreciated
After receiving feedback from @exist270 the entire essay was rewritten with almost all suggestions implemented. Simpler, less fancy words and jumbled thoughts
Will be updating the website to the new version and would love another round of this kind of feedback
THANK YOU for taking the time 🧡
After receiving feedback from @exist270 the entire essay was rewritten with almost all suggestions implemented. Simpler, less fancy words and jumbled thoughts
Will be updating the website to the new version and would love another round of this kind of feedback
THANK YOU for taking the time 🧡
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