Just finished reading the essay, @Canadian National Guard . On the whole, it doesnt exactly light a fire under my ass to join the movement. While the intentions are generally in alignment with my values, the language is underwhelming. Theres a lack of voracity that I believe is needed to tackle these issues. You've got the right idea in making a call to action, yet the call isnt LOUD enough. My advice would be to use hard language, because this endeavor is going to require people to endure some very difficult challenges. Keep on keeping on CNG