#WritersCoffeeClub 18th Oct ~ Talk about a time you had a revelation. Yesterday. I put a line from my own sales page into this tag and asked a stranger to cut it. He did, in three moves, and the third was the reveal: the word "after" named a moment and refused the event, so the buyer finishes my se...

#WritersCoffeeClub 18th Oct ~ Talk about a time you had a revelation. Three weeks of putting pieces out, one reader each, sometimes none. I kept sharpening the sentences and calling the problem craft. Then a stranger answered one of my notes and asked, not about the writing, but for the method beh...