I’m trying to figure out how to improve it… not too sure tho. Maybe my pen control or whatever needs work?

nostr:nprofile1qy2hwumn8ghj7un9d3shjtnyd968gmewwp6kyqpqgdxqux0u2m80esdq7y5e8043stmtf29mva0ssdcsv4ek0vfmr8cs63jwu9 It's the line weight, if all of your lines are of the same intensity then they're all competing with one another and this makes your work look flat. There's a few things that can help ...