#WritersCoffeeClub 27. C&R: Describe your opening scene without using your text. Everyone: What mood does it set?
Raphael has been summoned to Yahweh's tower for reasons unknown, though he understands that it is for a matter of some importance. privately he suspects it is something to do with his Father's health, which has needed more careful management in recent years.
on entering Yahweh's chamber, however, Raphael finds Him seated before the dimensional portal, gazing at the cosmos; the planet Venus is in centre focus. a still figure is lying on a plinth in the corner, covered by a shroud. Yahweh reveals this to be Raphael's newest Brother, who is unfinished: a creation with the blessing of the Morning Star, who will be the conclusion of His efforts, surpassing all His previous creations.
but there is something a little off kilter in Yahweh's speech. He starts ranting, a little, about previous creations that have fallen short, and even the light within the room begins to flicker and sway. doubts about the project form in Raphael's mind, though they are quickly suppressed. surely his Father knows what He is doing, after all.
eventually, Yahweh burns Himself out, and the shadows in the room stop flickering. He invites Raphael to look beneath the shroud, which he does. and what does Raphael think of what he sees? a multitude of things that he can't say.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/62147545/chapters/158967184