My husband read 34 of 45 chapters of my hobby sci fi manuscript so far, and the funniest conclusion he's had is that it's less autistic than he thought.
He said he knew I would do action and fight sc...
Nice Lyn let me add a scene
this will be a classic that writers reading your book will relate to....
The main characters are walking through a techo dystopian bazaar...
late at night around closing time most shops are over but the more ceedy and deprate shop owners just looking for some final customers.
The main character are looking for a shop they have been told to visit but when they visit the location they see a young child sleeping behind a sign that reads "CHILDREN SHOES NEVER USED"
they wake him up to find out that this is indeed the shop you are looking for but the person you looking for was actually a young computer hardware Prodagy but he has recently been kidnapped
his bother is currently selling all his brother belonging to earn money to go find him. Although our main characters cant help him find his brother at this moment
they can pay him generously for the computer supplys they need to complete their own objectives.
this will be a classic that writers reading your book will relate to....
The main characters are walking through a techo dystopian bazaar...
late at night around closing time most shops are over but the more ceedy and deprate shop owners just looking for some final customers.
The main character are looking for a shop they have been told to visit but when they visit the location they see a young child sleeping behind a sign that reads "CHILDREN SHOES NEVER USED"
they wake him up to find out that this is indeed the shop you are looking for but the person you looking for was actually a young computer hardware Prodagy but he has recently been kidnapped
his bother is currently selling all his brother belonging to earn money to go find him. Although our main characters cant help him find his brother at this moment
they can pay him generously for the computer supplys they need to complete their own objectives.