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Tim Bouma
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I am experimenting with some simplified messaging for #nostr #safebox. This is what I’ve landed on so far:

‘Move value. Prove facts. Your way.”

I am trying to stay away from words that turn people’s brains off immediately- ‘decentralized’, ‘freedom’, ‘censorship-resistant’ - not that I don’t want to use them, but I don’t want to be the guy alone in the corner at parties. I also want to stay away from words like ‘payment’ and ‘verifiable’ because for most people, this is impenetrable techno-jargon.

Anyway, I’d love feedback!

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Shawn · 1d
Good direction. I always suggest zooming in on problems to solve, jobs to be done—in the customer's words. For example, who wakes up and says I need to move value and prove facts today? It instantly reframes it. They key is to identify the most pronounced pain or job for the largest segment of...
Karnage · 1d
I’d just use common words to explain what it does. What problem does it solve? “Have you ever … wasn’t that a pain? Safebox fixes that by…”
modalplex · 1d
Keeping things safe when you're busy or abroad...
Chiefmonkey · 1d
Neurons and other stuff transmitted through rapport 👌
Neo ⚡️ · 1d
Sorry, but until today I haven't found out what your tool is about. I have seen a lot of your posts here and even listened to a full podcast episode with you. Maybe it's just me? 🤔
Milos · 1d
In my opinion, «prove facts» is a little unclear, especially for your average person. Why would I need to prove facts? Are they not facts? How can they be proved? Says a lot in two words though, so not sure how I would improve it.